Wednesday, July 27, 2011

kayaking is fun

      Yesterday afternoon,we went kayaking.But I didn't row a boat.
       And we took the car for kayaking.We were excited.I rowed a boat with Feng Yunhao.I began of the kayaking.
      We were number one.but we had a few problems.we can't turn.so we collided reed..and we went straight right now.last,we looked for my other friends. we were interested in it.we also have a game.but we were lost.
      it was time to go back.we were going back.
      I had a great time.
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3 comments:

  1. Victoria BoltonJuly 27, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    Lou, you wrote a lot of sentences; good job! You and Feng look like expert kayakers. That's a nice photo.
    You could combine 2 sentences with a comma like this: We also had a game going, but we were lost." I am wondering what the game was.
    I'm glad you had a great time. Grade = 89 = B

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  2. Victoria BoltonJuly 27, 2011 at 6:33 PM

    This counts for Post #3, so you are ahead of the class.

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  3. MAGANDAJuly 28, 2011 at 7:41 AM

    Hm Kayaking ? nice post man !

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