I come from China.And I am a Chinese student.I take part in this nazareth program.I like English very much.So I came to the United States.I think English is interesting.And I want to have some English friend.
Last morning,I had a English test.
Last night,I played basketball with my friend.It's my favorite sports!I played basketball two hours.It was exciting and tired.I was really happy!
Thank you for your first post! Your sentences are well written. You have a solid paragraph. I think you could use more adjectives and adverbs to make your paragraph more vivid. I have some suggestions:
ReplyDelete1. You wrote, "I want to have some English friend." It would be better to say, " I want to have some American friends." OR "I want to have some English-speaking friends." When you say 'some' you need the plural noun 'friends'.
2. You wrote 'Last morning, I had a English test." Better: Yesterday morning I had an English test. (A or an? An before a vowel.) (Even though it makes perfect sense, we don't say 'last morning'.)
Grade for Post #1 = 88